Wednesday, July 2, 2008

Nothingness..!!


Crying.for nothing..
no sorrow.. no pain..no loss..
but..then..
no happiness.. no smile.. no ecstasy either..
"but then why the tears..??"
maybe for the nothingness..

pain is the feel for me..
nothing else..and all the time..
"where,,,some reason for it..??"
can't say..it is the thing m used..
no where and every where..
reason.. i think the same..nothingness..

wishes..yeah i remember what it means..
had a few glittering ones for me as well..
but don't remember them now..
just remember i had some..
"where are they gone now..??"
maybe in that same.. nothingness..

I do nothing now..
no upcoming..dates to look for..
no hopes..or moments i await for..
just sit all day long..
"doing what..??"
crying for nothingness..

10 comments:

Zubair said...

Great work there.Keep the flow going on.

Shubhanshu said...

geee... thanks..!! i'll try.

The Archangel said...

I believe in Nothingness. There actually is a point in life when there is nothing to see, nothing to feel, nothing to hope for, noting to claim as ours...

I could relate to the poem. Good job... would love to see more of it in the future.
Goodluck

Unknown said...

yeah!!!
ITS GOOD........
{waise tune contents kahan se churae hai........}

Shubhanshu said...

to The Archangel
yeah.. i was in that kinda state when i wrote it.. just 15 mins before publishing it here..

yeah i'll try to..

to ankit
saale kutte nahi churaye.. i wrote it myself..!! x-(

jeens........... said...

woooh...a great piece of shit...i mean i loved it man!!!!...never knew u were so serious about being idle..what a celebration of nothingness......keep up the work....

Kshitij Bhatnagar said...

u wrote this shit..???
it has nothing in it........

nd where is ur devil nd man somthng shit...??

Shubhanshu said...

to Jeenu

yeah flavor it all...

to KJ

yeah.. i feel for that one.. i lost it. with my cell.. it was something good..!! :(

Unknown said...

he hehehe.
kya baat hei merae english kae gaalib.
maine pura padha nahi hei.
but starting is good.

he he he.

Shubhanshu said...

oh thanku thanku.. read it full then say something..

as for galib thing.. well.. velle log jo chahe wo ban sakte hain..